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  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: f this

    Hello I'm here to review your poem (: okay this poem was very dark and had a very eerie tone that I very thoroughly enjoyed. the imagery is very graphic-ish ...

    Sun Oct 15, 2017 1:38 pm
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Everything I Forgot

    Hello I'm here to review your poem (:. This is definitely not the poem I expected when I read the title, however, with that being said, I did really enjoy ...

    Sun Oct 15, 2017 1:27 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Beauty is Truth

    Hello I'm here to review your poem (: Such a short poem yet so good!! I really love this. In twenty eight words you created something so beautiful. It truly ...

    Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:02 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Porcelain Doll

    Hello I'm here to review your poem (: So, let me start with, I absolutely love this poem. It is the epitome of something/one toxic, something/one you don't need. You ...

    Sun Oct 15, 2017 3:53 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ever-changing

    Hello I'm here to review your poem a little bit(: Okay so I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors at all. The only thing I didn't understand was the ...

    Sun Oct 15, 2017 3:41 am
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: after a parade

    Hello DemonGoddess I'm going to review your poem. Okay let me just say. Me. Too. I am currently at the end of my season and my first parade was a ...

    Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:10 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I lost you, I lost myself.

    Hello AllisonArgent I'm here to review your poem (:. This is a VERY good poem. The imagery is beautiful, and this conveys an amazing message. now it is the last ...

    Sat Oct 14, 2017 3:06 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: In Us

    Hello midnightdreary I'm here to review and break your poem down a little bit (:. Okay I'm going to start with, overall, I was very moved by this poem. I ...

    Sat Oct 14, 2017 2:52 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Please Stop

    Hello TheLeakyPen I'm here to review your poem just a bit (: I would like to start off by saying, I really like this poem, I truly do. it made ...

    Sat Oct 14, 2017 2:20 pm


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