wizkid515

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: How is this possible, how could one person write so good. :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: You have an amazing talent ...

Wow! loved your story, its an amazing storyline. i saw a few grammar erros but they have already been taking care of. I can't wait to read more. good luck ...

Great Prologue :smt068 :smt065 :smt069 :smt072 :smt079 :smt051 I can't really see any thing wrong that hasn't already been said but i just have to say that this was so ...

WOW! Great Story Alert :thud: Your story held me in suspense while i read to see what happened to Genny. Her aunt is so cruel. I.E. " All in favour ...

:thud: WOW! this story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cool i can't wait till i can read more of it as fair as i could see there wasn't any grammar or spelling errors ...

Hey your story is great i can't wait to read the rest. I don't understand is Sera deaf or not you had a few typos but they have already been ...

hey i love this story and can't wait for more :thud: your details are amazing and i can't wait to reveiw the next chapter i couldn't find anythind wrong (i'm ...

some of your sentences sounded a bit strange and i want to know why she would decline his ride and the hop on. your story sounded cool can't wait till ...

Hey your story is cool, sweet and WE WANT MORE i think this should be made into a novel or longer story can't wait to see if you write more. ...

Hi i think this poem sounded a little weired. (No offence) you had some grammar mistakes but i won't go into them. you ending sounded a little disappointing. this should ...

hey i love your begining i think that spark bright sounds a little fairyish but still love the story :shock: :lol: