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I do not think the pacing is terrible, in fact it felt perfect to me. Maybe in your mind you wanted the story to go longer, that is why you ...

I do not think the pacing is terrible, in fact it felt perfect to me. Maybe in your mind you wanted the story to go longer, that is why you ...

Oh my god, that was so fresh and relatable!! I honestly have no suggestions, you are too good at the thing that you are doing. The piece was short and ...

Wow, quite interesting way to write about a small incident. I like how not so much happened, but still the characters feel like real people. I wish I could replicate ...

Beautiful! it's almost like a song. I like that the poem is also a little peek into the mind of the poet, their insecurities and strengths both are visible. Great ...

Thanks for the review Kavya :) I like your interpretations!

I think that was a cute little peek into the lives of Celina and Alejandro, I would like to read more of them. Your writing is to the point and ...

That was gut-wrenching. Well written.

And to answer your question, I did not storyboard it on paper, but what was going to happen in the story was pretty much in my mind for like a ...

Really glad to know that you enjoyed my little short story! so grateful of your constructive feedback, the fact that you analysed and pin pointed exact areas that can be ...

Hey Marshall2! thanks for reading my short story. Its a lovely feeling that somebody took their time and read my story and also gave a constructive feedback!! You are so ...