windrattlestheblinds

I should add, also, that I like vampire stories. Vampires are my favorite humanoid mythological creatures and always have been. I have no problem with vampire characters who attack and/or ...

It isn't just a story when the comparisons are textual. Evie acts like a textbook closeted person and totally ignores the fact that she is, in fact, attacking people on ...

As for the Vampire Court: I read the prologue. Exactly how are they protecting humanity by savaging innocent human beings to force unwilling vampires to turn those humans into more ...

Vampires do not get a cookie for not killing people. No, seriously, they don't. Not killing people is the most basic, fundamental level of basic decency. If you have homicidal ...

like, that's the difference between the bad security and the unbelievability of the physical assessment. the bad security feels like a plot point, and something you did on purpose and ...

yeah, as i said, the security failures are SO OBVIOUSLY intentional on your part that as a reader, i'm content to pin the blame on OO being either incompetent or ...

first thing is distance. if you're in a fight and disadvantaged, you want to stay as far away from your aggressors as possible so they can't hurt you. if she's ...

Just dropping by to say that, having just read chapter one first: You don't need this prologue. It provides no information that didn't at least get hinted at in chapter ...

Heh, no problem xD I'm enjoying reading this a lot; you can go ahead and tag me when the next installment is posted, if you want.

thanks for the review! i'm glad you enjoyed :) starting sentences with conjunctions is a stylistic choice here, as are the sentence fragments/weird pieces beginning with em dashes/parenthetical fragme

-Amnesia is not always correlated with a loss of vocabulary or understanding of language. Madder has probably never touched a microscope in her life. She still knows what one is ...

Thanks for the feedback. No, microscopes don't exist in this world, but they do exist in the world Madder came from. Which I would have thought would be implied by ...

Yep! you tag with the @ symbol and the username, i.e. @ElizabethFiction

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it. The reason Madder can see out the window is she's propped up, not lying flat%u2014lying flat after a near drowning can make ...

awesome. i plan to have a /lot/ of fun teasing queenie's agenda. i like making people guess. a lot. and also it's part of the first sweep of the arc ...