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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Stars: The Forgotten

    Yes...all your questions will be answered soon...wait young raevynstar...all will come... Sorry that's just me and my deep dark witch voice. Thanks for the review and I will fix up ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Stars: The Forgotten

    Hey @ThePhoenix, Thanks for the review! Now I will respond to it. At the beginning, how is he sure he doesn't work 'up there'? Actually how does he even know ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Stars: The Forgotten

    Thanks for the review @NicolMemo. Very kind words, and part two will be coming out soon.

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Will

    Harsh much...seriously you need like a temporary ban or something. @Nate

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Father Doesn't Like The Noise | Edited

    Oh god, I can't believe I'm doing this but...there*

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Sane - Chapter 1

    Thanks so much, IronSpark. About the 'OOH,' I actually meant 'ooh' not 'Ohh.' So that clarifies that. About the 'refraining to use contractions,' it was simply a style choice. If ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Sane - Chapter 1

    Hey all, Thanks for all your reviews and feedback. We will take it all into account and we will modify it. I would like to say that without you guys ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Sane - Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review, we really value it! :) -willachilles

    May 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    Hey Yasmeen, First of all, thanks for the review. We are always open to feedback. Now after reading your review I found that many of these mistakes were in the ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: 4 steps to become an exceptional high school student...

    May 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    Thanks you guys so much for the feedback, and we (this was a team effort) are working on it to improve these four chapters. Next chapter will be coming soon.

    May 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Chapter 1- Knocks on a Door

    May 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Sane (The Old Version)

    This is only up to Chapter 4 - the rest 'Will' come.

    May 13, 2015


I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.
— Pablo Neruda