wickedlymuggle

Hi Vivian! Loved it! This was awesome. This story can go in so many different directions, which I am excited to see. I have a couple of notes. First of ...

Hi James! First of all, I agree with what AdrianMoon and Chaser said. Three tiny things. One, in the sentence "Listen to your sister Max!" You had and extra space ...

Hi Emma! (I am not even going to bother with how many times I have been here) I am back! Here for another reveiw! (Insert Jazz hands here) Once again, ...

Hi Lau2001! (Again) This chapter was really good! Great job! There was only one major note that I had. The first paragraph had a lot of errors. Just to save ...

Hi Waddlers! (It is really fun to say that!) Good start. I just have a couple of notes: 1. First of all, the ending. I like the cliff hanger and ...

Hi Pemi! First of all, I agree with ClackFlip on the transition to the flashback thing. I could have used work. Maybe you could mention something about the drifting into ...

Hi Lau2001! You have a good start to your story, but I was a little confused in some parts. Also some word choice could be changed. Instead of the word ...

Hi EternalRain! I know I am late to the party commenting on this, but I am doing it anyway. This really touched me. My brother is autistic, is I really ...

Hi EnderFlash! I loved your story!! If this was a book, this would be the type I would finish in one day because it is so good. You had great ...

Hi Emma!! Loved it. That's all I have to say. It was beautiful. This is a whole different side of Ida that I have never seen before. To me, Ida ...

Hi AdelVise! This is a beautiful story with a great message. I really enjoyed reading it. I have two notes. The second paragraph was a little confusing to me. Maybe ...

Hi Snowfire!(again) Good job' I really liked your story. I have a few suggestions. The character Christian just sort of popped into the story and I was a little confused. ...

Hi raevynstar! Great work! I can totally relate to what you have done here. I just have two notes for you. I think you should change the sentence," I'm in ...

Hi Wonderwoman! First of all, your writing is beautiful! You allowed me to transport myself into your world you have painted, which I know all authors want to achieve. My ...

Hi EmmaKi (for the third time) First of all, the ending is really good. Situations like that in real life make me want to scream! One quick thing. You said, ...