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Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Grief, Episode 4
Hi Waddlers! This is very late, I apologize! I don't have much to say on this, but I have a couple quick notes. First of all, I loved the dragons!!! ...
Jan 16, 2016 -
Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Darkness, Episode 3
Hi Waddlers! This was an awesome chapter! Great job! I really liked how you developed your characters more. It made them interesting and unique. Side note but Ana kind of ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: Fairy God Sister -- Introduction and Chapter One
Hi rachellecarter! This was a beautiful story! I enjoyed it immensely. The whole idea is genius and I urge you to kept writing this!!!!! If no one else reads it ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 6
Hi EternalRain! It has been so long! This was cool. Yay! My only note where about the beginning. I don't think it really fit in with the rest of the ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 5
Hi EternalRain! (Once Again) This was awesome! Great job on this one. I liked the whole plot twist of the divorce. It adds some action that was not there before. ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 4
Hi EternalRain! (again) Once again, very cute. I really like your story. I don't have much to say for this one, other than once again, the chapter seemed short. Also ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 3
Hi EternalRain! AWWW!!!! CADE'S GOT A CRUSH!!!!!!!! THAT IS ADORABLE!!! Once again, I thought this was really cute and sweet. I have to say, I loved your introduction to this, ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: The Tree People Chapter 5
Hi roeckercody! [again] Do I even have to say it? Once again, this was great. Great cliff hanger, great storyline. Just great! You mentioned in your description of this that ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 4
Hi roeckercody! Once again, I loved this! What a plot twist!!! I don't think I have mentioned this before, but I love how you do each chapter from a different ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 3
Hi roeckercody!!! I LOVED THIS!!!! I could not look away. Once again, your idea is genius, and I really enjoy how you have done this. I like how you have ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Across the Void (Part 3:)
Hi Terian805! I am finally here! Sorry I took so long to review this! :/ I will start with the positives. I think you have a great idea going here, ...
Sep 4, 2015 -
Re: Airplane (Revised)
Hi Racket! This was beautiful. I can see where you made improvements from your last writing, and it is great to know that I helped in some way shape or ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 2
Hi EternalRain! Happy Review Month! I am sorry I am so late to review this, but I am here now! Starting with the positives, I think this was a really ...
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: Parallel Needs: Chapter One: Part One
Hi BEWriter! I am back! Sorry I took so long to get to this. :/ Well, I am here now! Starting with the positives, I really like Maddie's character. There ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
Hi Zen! I loved this prolouge! Like DarkWarrior said, I think this is exactly what a prolouge should be. It gets the readers intrigued, makes us wonder what will happen ...
Sep 1, 2015
