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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Grief, Episode 4

    Hi Waddlers! This is very late, I apologize! I don't have much to say on this, but I have a couple quick notes. First of all, I loved the dragons!!! ...

    Jan 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: How We Made The World Just A Little Bit Nicer - Darkness, Episode 3

    Hi Waddlers! This was an awesome chapter! Great job! I really liked how you developed your characters more. It made them interesting and unique. Side note but Ana kind of ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Fairy God Sister -- Introduction and Chapter One

    Hi rachellecarter! This was a beautiful story! I enjoyed it immensely. The whole idea is genius and I urge you to kept writing this!!!!! If no one else reads it ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Realistic Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 6

    Hi EternalRain! It has been so long! This was cool. Yay! My only note where about the beginning. I don't think it really fit in with the rest of the ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 5

    Hi EternalRain! (Once Again) This was awesome! Great job on this one. I liked the whole plot twist of the divorce. It adds some action that was not there before. ...

    Sep 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 4

    Hi EternalRain! (again) Once again, very cute. I really like your story. I don't have much to say for this one, other than once again, the chapter seemed short. Also ...

    Sep 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 3

    Hi EternalRain! AWWW!!!! CADE'S GOT A CRUSH!!!!!!!! THAT IS ADORABLE!!! Once again, I thought this was really cute and sweet. I have to say, I loved your introduction to this, ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tree People Chapter 5

    Hi roeckercody! [again] Do I even have to say it? Once again, this was great. Great cliff hanger, great storyline. Just great! You mentioned in your description of this that ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 4

    Hi roeckercody! Once again, I loved this! What a plot twist!!! I don't think I have mentioned this before, but I love how you do each chapter from a different ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tree People (Working Title) Chapter 3

    Hi roeckercody!!! I LOVED THIS!!!! I could not look away. Once again, your idea is genius, and I really enjoy how you have done this. I like how you have ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Across the Void (Part 3:)

    Hi Terian805! I am finally here! Sorry I took so long to review this! :/ I will start with the positives. I think you have a great idea going here, ...

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Airplane (Revised)

    Hi Racket! This was beautiful. I can see where you made improvements from your last writing, and it is great to know that I helped in some way shape or ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 2

    Hi EternalRain! Happy Review Month! I am sorry I am so late to review this, but I am here now! Starting with the positives, I think this was a really ...

    Sep 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Parallel Needs: Chapter One: Part One

    Hi BEWriter! I am back! Sorry I took so long to get to this. :/ Well, I am here now! Starting with the positives, I really like Maddie's character. There ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue

    Hi Zen! I loved this prolouge! Like DarkWarrior said, I think this is exactly what a prolouge should be. It gets the readers intrigued, makes us wonder what will happen ...

    Sep 1, 2015


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