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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 3

    Yay! A short one, ha- Sorry the reviews are a bit later than normal. I had to take a day off because I was sick. I still am but feeling ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 2

    Alright, time to conquer! :D I hope the last review did great with the development. I am going to try to make most of my reviews like that, giving idea's ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 1

    Hey there! :D Comments Just a few comments. :D skool Don't make me kill you o.e lol. It is spelled "school" not "skool" unless you are trying to make her ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 2

    An here I am again! :D I am really excited and want to know if she will become Hit-Girl again... :O Comments Great job on the chapter part, I like ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 1

    Hey there! :D Review time, ha- Comments Love the chapter, though there was one big crazy thing. The nightmare thing? That I think should be italicized and not so much ...

    Oct 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 3: Reborn Part 2

    Back, back in the New York grooooooove. xD Ha- Alright I will get down to the lovely review. :) Comments I like it! A lot! Now I have a question, ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 3: Reborn Part 1

    Bam! I am back, ha- Alright, lets get this review started. Comments Most of the comments will just be a little details that I have noticed and questions that had ...

    Oct 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Bullying Project: Taylor's Story

    Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your novel today! :D Comments Just a little warning, since this is a long post. The review will tend ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenage Dilemma -Dar Real

    Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Comments Great job with the article! Though I would not italicize every single word, I ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: House of Sorrows

    Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today! :) Comments Okay... I don't see any periods within this poem... There is no way that ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Thrown Words

    Hey there I am Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job with this poem. I like it a lot and I have ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Language of the Eyes

    Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job, there is a lot of passion throughout the poem. I like it ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 2

    Hey there! I'm back and ready to review! :) You know who I am so, I'll just skip that. Lets get to it. :) Comments I love how intense this ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 1

    Hey there! Onyx here to review your book, ha- Here we go! Comments You are doing AMAZING with this story! I love it so much, I am defiantly hooked. I ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: my story-baby dragons

    Hey there! I'm Onyx from Knights of the Green Room and I am here to review your novel. :) Comments Great story so far, it sounds interesting. There are just ...

    Oct 10, 2013


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