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Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 3
Yay! A short one, ha- Sorry the reviews are a bit later than normal. I had to take a day off because I was sick. I still am but feeling ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 2
Alright, time to conquer! :D I hope the last review did great with the development. I am going to try to make most of my reviews like that, giving idea's ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 5: A Week On Part 1
Hey there! :D Comments Just a few comments. :D skool Don't make me kill you o.e lol. It is spelled "school" not "skool" unless you are trying to make her ...
Oct 22, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 2
An here I am again! :D I am really excited and want to know if she will become Hit-Girl again... :O Comments Great job on the chapter part, I like ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 4: Muscle Spasms Part 1
Hey there! :D Review time, ha- Comments Love the chapter, though there was one big crazy thing. The nightmare thing? That I think should be italicized and not so much ...
Oct 18, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 3: Reborn Part 2
Back, back in the New York grooooooove. xD Ha- Alright I will get down to the lovely review. :) Comments I like it! A lot! Now I have a question, ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 3: Reborn Part 1
Bam! I am back, ha- Alright, lets get this review started. Comments Most of the comments will just be a little details that I have noticed and questions that had ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: The Bullying Project: Taylor's Story
Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your novel today! :D Comments Just a little warning, since this is a long post. The review will tend ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Teenage Dilemma -Dar Real
Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Comments Great job with the article! Though I would not italicize every single word, I ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: House of Sorrows
Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today! :) Comments Okay... I don't see any periods within this poem... There is no way that ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Thrown Words
Hey there I am Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job with this poem. I like it a lot and I have ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: Language of the Eyes
Hey there! I'm Onyx from KotGR and I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job, there is a lot of passion throughout the poem. I like it ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 2
Hey there! I'm back and ready to review! :) You know who I am so, I'll just skip that. Lets get to it. :) Comments I love how intense this ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 2: Hit-Girl Returns Part 1
Hey there! Onyx here to review your book, ha- Here we go! Comments You are doing AMAZING with this story! I love it so much, I am defiantly hooked. I ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: my story-baby dragons
Hey there! I'm Onyx from Knights of the Green Room and I am here to review your novel. :) Comments Great story so far, it sounds interesting. There are just ...
Oct 10, 2013
