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I really like this, Im sure everyone above has covered the nit-picks. I think this is fine on the writing style and yeah it seems a bit cliche that she ...

*littles tears* AAAWWW! Hi forest. This is sooooo cuuutteeee! Okay. Here are my nit-picks. fattening vending macheienes Machines* "I really, really do look you...and everything I said to you was, ...

This is really good. I like the theme, the fact you wrote about the word you used as the acrostic. I don't get the bubbling and gurgling part, however. Maybe ...

Hi there. There are birds tattooed blue over the curve of her shoulder, It seems odd. Should it be "There are birds tattooed blue over the cure of their shoulder/s" ...

Hey. Okay so you are writing this to them, yes? Yet you say "They changed my life, I will miss them" yadda yadda yadda. But if you write it in ...

Woah! I can afford to go to D.C.? OMGEEEE! I loved this (thanks for the mention btw) so funny! Nothing i can find that is wrong. Yws is so officially ...

This story is very emotional and i wonder, where was the inspiration from? Anyway. I liked it. In fact, this is one of the times where I wish there is ...

This was cool, but as Elinor said, your MC doesn't develop much. Her cousin, Amanda, seems like a flirty girl, yet it's her engagement party? What's going on? "You must ...

I really, really miss you. It’s been 8 years now; Mom always says you are safe where you are. She says you are in a beautiful place called heaven. I ...

Filling my lungs with a gulp of icy air, I forced my sore muscles to move under the strain of depravation of food and sleep. I rushed towards the Ferris ...

This is quite familiar, except for the second part. I swear I read this before, without the bank part. This is really good. One thing, Susan pretty much explains the ...

This was amazing, Cres, I've never read any your poems and this is awesome. A x3CoFx3 said, it changed my view on abortion. You described it in a kind way ...

Here on request, Shubhi! I have finally killed Amanda Bailey. No need for repetition, dear :) It was tough but I somehow managed it. I had to; nothing in the ...

This is a really interesting concept! Where'd you get the idea? A dream? Anyway, as captain.classy said, the first stanza is good but the second one just confuses me. I ...

"This is when I wish there was a LOVE button!" a quote from JaceClayton. I truly love this and there are no nitpicks I cand find. I love the creativity ...