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This poem wasn't about a breakup. It was about a nightmare where my boyfriend died and I woke up to realize he was laying beside me.

Thank you so much for your review! Positive feedback is lays so encouraging!

It's a poem about contradictions....

This poem is about committing suicide with heroin. If you have no experience with drugs, there's little to no way you'll understand the poem the way it was written, so ...

I intentionally make my poetry sing a happy tune to a dark undertone. I find it makes the reader think, and leaves the poem up to individual interpretation based on ...

I write my poetry to have various meanings and I love your interpretation, though it is not why I wrote the poem. THAT OF Course never makes an interpretation wrong. ...

The needle too far from the right way to die line is referencing using heroin to kill yourself. I intentionally make my poems sing songy with dark undertones.

This work is 18 because it is about suicide. The roses are a metaphor for blood flow, hence "weeping." They're neither negative nor positive, that is up to individual interpretation. ...

I appreciate your effort but this poem is extremely structured. Each stanza has the same weight, the longer lines are even and regular and the flow works perfrctly. I think ...

Thanks! I'll look into seeing what I can do with imagery in the middle. I wrote this sort of in a desperate state and didn't give it much thought

So you're right about "silver" it's not supposed to be "sliver" (typo! thanks!). Prays silence is intentional, in that author (myself) prays for a day without the silver tongue (which ...

Thanks for the tip! On my laptop this poem is 3 separate stanzas, but for some reason YWS won't let me do that!

Thank you! I'm glad to hear that my writing speaks in more ways than one, and to more than just me.

In my family there is one person in each generation with the "writer's curse." That person in every generation has gone on to do great and wonderful things with their ...