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Re: River God
Wow that was incredible! I love love LOVE it, I wish you'd written a whole book of this it's such lovely to read. Structurally it's really great, each verse is ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: Forget
Hi Lightsong, I really loved your poem! I loved the use of fantastical imagery to portray your sadness, it made it really interesting and intriguing. I could really tell how ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: it's not very safe in wonderland
Well I'd just like to say wow! This was so creative and I really loved the affiliation with Alice in Wonderland (which is by the way one of my favourite ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Velvet Twirlings
Firstly I'd just like to say I really like your username! This poem was really nice, I loved the flow of the words, I know some people might not like ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: The God who wanted to be Human
Hi ladcat13! Yay another whovian!!! Anyway hope this review is okay compared to the lovely ones below. I honestly can't find any faults with this poem, all the expressions feel ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Ouija
Dear Dutiful, I hope this review is ok, I'm better at reviewing poetry to be honest though. At first it was a tad predictable but as the story progressed it ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Smile
Hi Bball41! I really like your poem and I couldn't help but review it! The structure's was probably my favourite part, it's so interesting. Each paragraph brought in a new ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: rice and retrograde
Hey Dreamwalker! I couldn't help but review your poem, it's beautiful! I feel like I truly connected with the narrator through the gorgeous comparisons you used. The emotions were so ...
May 27, 2015
