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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: River God

    Wow that was incredible! I love love LOVE it, I wish you'd written a whole book of this it's such lovely to read. Structurally it's really great, each verse is ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forget

    Hi Lightsong, I really loved your poem! I loved the use of fantastical imagery to portray your sadness, it made it really interesting and intriguing. I could really tell how ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: it's not very safe in wonderland

    Well I'd just like to say wow! This was so creative and I really loved the affiliation with Alice in Wonderland (which is by the way one of my favourite ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Theatre Re: Velvet Twirlings

    Firstly I'd just like to say I really like your username! This poem was really nice, I loved the flow of the words, I know some people might not like ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The God who wanted to be Human

    Hi ladcat13! Yay another whovian!!! Anyway hope this review is okay compared to the lovely ones below. I honestly can't find any faults with this poem, all the expressions feel ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Ouija

    Dear Dutiful, I hope this review is ok, I'm better at reviewing poetry to be honest though. At first it was a tad predictable but as the story progressed it ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Smile

    Hi Bball41! I really like your poem and I couldn't help but review it! The structure's was probably my favourite part, it's so interesting. Each paragraph brought in a new ...

    May 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: rice and retrograde

    Hey Dreamwalker! I couldn't help but review your poem, it's beautiful! I feel like I truly connected with the narrator through the gorgeous comparisons you used. The emotions were so ...

    May 27, 2015


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind