watergirlwriter3

I liked it. I wrote something similar but it didn't go over so well. Great job. I liked the thoughtfulness of it and the rhythme.

hahahahaha! I really liked this! It kind of reminds me of me. Is that sad? Hmmmmm. It's really funny and creative. I can kind of hear Weezer singing it.

okay,so it's not WOW material, but I like. However I am the one who wrote it.hum

I really, really liked this. I think it flowed really well. It seems like something that someone would read in a jam poetry session. It's great, good job.

I liked this. I can feel your emotion, but it needs better rhythme. Besides that it was good.

I really like this poem. The structure is great. Your writing continues to make me go "damn, that's good".

this was very good. mmmmm...nice and gripping, just like I like it. I've never read your stuff, but I wouldn't mind reading it again. It really would do good a ...

I like this poem alot. It's very well written. great job!

im kind of confused. sounds like some one angry because they were cheated by a lover. but i dont know. besides that its good.