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so much emotion conveyed through each and every word this ones a keeper:))) Keep up the good work and never give up!

very good emotional voice you portrayed i felt every word that was written Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

very well written and is very touching the way you had described the soul and the womans body was very brilliant in comparison to her loneliness she feels Keep up ...

short and still yet very entertaining there is one thing i would add....a twist to your story in the poem....its to ordinary Keep up the good work and never give ...

very well written and definetly pulls at the heartstings Bush....that was a very good touch Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

love the way you made all the words rhyme perfectly with each other i felt every word that was written Keep up the good work and NEVER give up.

this piece is very well written and i can feel every word written this piece makes it very easy to relate to and as a writer that is one of ...

very well written and as for the could be a tad bit better...for the dialogues that it is I love this piece and how well you described each scene as ...

well there isn't much to say besides the fact that your poem is clearly not going anywhere maybe you should consider rewriting it to make it more presentable Keep up ...

a very touching and moving poem that touched both my heart and soul Keep up the good work and don't give up.

very well written from a twitter point of view i do have to say that is by far the best summary of a harry potter book ever written congradulations keep ...

this introduction is very heartfelt and moving i enjoyed it very much Two things to work on: 1. grabbing the attention of the reader instantly 2. bringing key point of ...