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Hi Jcbutterrtoast! I really liked your poem. Its very descriptive which only made it better. The selection of adjectives which you provided were just brilliant. I especially enjoyed the word ...

This poem is absolutely beautiful! I really really lost it at the last line "When trying to forget the past 18 years was your biggest concern." I liked your decision ...

Hi Sophie! Your poem was beautiful and teeming with incredibly, and powerfully raw emotion. So much imagery! From the line "I want to cut off my hair and paint a ...

Hi Dreamy! I really like your poetic style. This poem was just so thought provoking. I don't know exactly how you do it, but somehow, it seems, that you made ...

Its a very powerful haiku. but like tgirly said, it does seem a little incomplete. You have an amazing idea going on but the statements in the haiku are lacking ...

Wow. This poem is brilliant! I love how it starts out peaceful, happy even with: "Happiness in the air, Celebrations aloud" and how it quickly takes a turn for the ...

I'm a huge Taylor Swift fan and I think you really did an excellent job of giving your story a song. Or should I say giving her song a story. ...