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That was very well written. I espcially liked the letter at the end. It gave the piece a perfect ending. For some people, Iraq is a very tender subject and ...

I take off my invisable hat to you for attempting to do something with fairy tales. I really enjoyed it. There isn't really much else I can say except maybe ...

This was a very good poem. I liked pretty much everything about it. I would just like to point out that I comment on the piece and not the words, ...

It wasn't really a good poem. No offence. In fact, I don't really think it could be called a poem at all. I'm not going to comment at all on ...

That was beautiful. Very moving and thought provoking. I especially liked how the parents were reffered to as 'Mommy' and 'Daddy'. It added that touch of innocence that only children ...

If someone gets mad at you for mentioning God just tell them to get over it. God is a word/diety that can be used by anyone and everyone in any ...

That was a rather unusual poem (in my opinion). Unusual but good. I'm saying good, rather than great or brilliant because, well. Whilst I was reading it it was just ...

I would have enjoyed this a lot more if you had put more description in, made more comparisons to help give a better overall image (make it easier to vizualize ...

OMG! Do you know how sigusted I felt when I read that. It seemed so real. Man Jared is severely coo coo ka doo. But, Lawrence. I don't like the ...

Could you please enlighten me as to how this has got anything to do the little girl, Matilda who was told that as she grew up her powers would dissapear ...

Eep. I kinda got the feeling that he abuses her. Iactually thought, when you said Faith, that it was a girl. It might be because I never really thought of ...