vitamere

I enjoyed the vivid imagery and use of metaphors in this poem a lot, and the character of the narrator cracked me up at times and also made me think ...

Hi there! I thought the idea of the poem was interesting but it wasn't substantial enough to tell me a story. Who's "they"? I would love to know who the ...

I really empathized with the sorrowfulness of this poem. Although I felt like the "old roads" imagery got a bit lost/forgotten in the middle, I liked how you brought it ...

Oh man, I really enjoyed the imagery in this poem. You painted a vivid picture in both sight, smell, and hearing. I loved the simplicity in this - I feel ...

I thought this was an interesting poem! You did very well with imagery, and the theme with which you started off with - how love is garden - is so ...

Oh, man. Crucifixion definitely was a gritty, ugly form of torture/execution, and I think this poem really communicates that. I think it's interesting how it rhymed - this makes the ...

I think it's interesting how "Support, Love, & Strength" seem to stand out in the poem - it makes sense, because those are what keeps you and your loved ones ...