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Re: i'm feeling unpoetic.
You didn't capitalize the 'I' *has a fit* ALWAYS CAPATILIZE YOUR 'I', IF YOU DON'T THEN IT'S WEIRD READING THE WORK *faints*
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Why didn't anyone warn me?
A few grammar related errors, but It was defenitly worth my time.
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Whistle of the Wind, Song of the Rain
It needs more of some punctuation, abd I agree with Black star of darkness there isn't really an image
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Exhale
Beautiful~ *claps hands*
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: That's all
meh...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Friendship (revised)
*claps hands* Well done! Bravo! encore! encore!
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: The day that had not a morning.
Boring >.
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Our Last Kiss
I have to agree with Cade, this is a dairy entry! Why would we care!? Still, its well written.. Try harder next time. *keep rockin!* -Meg MERG
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Changes
Indeed, it doesn't make alot of sense! but yet its very wonderful:) *keep rockin!" -Meg LLOOOIIPPPP
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Mentality of a dangerous mafia.
This was very good :) *keep rockin!* -Meg NNNEEEERRRRRR
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Blood Heart Chapter three.
Is someone going to say anything...?
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Talking to Chris
*claps hands* Well done! Wonderful, WONDERFUL *keep rockin* -Megith
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Thunderstorm
Uhm... I thought it was a good story! But you carried on the sentances WAY to much. But well done anyway! *keep rockin* -Megithh
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Ghost of the Prophecy
I don't like this story, I'm really sorry but it just didn't pop my bubble! it's acctualy a REALLY good idea, but it's not writting well. you can do soooo ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Silence
It's a little short.... But the words are good.
Feb 24, 2008