vikingblood92

Personally it's not a favoured writing style of mine (though you can't please everyone). However, there are many aspects that I find nice. I like that's it choppy. Short sentences, ...

Lovely work. I enjoy reading dark and ominous descriptions, and you've captured that perfectly. You're doing a great example of "show, don't tell." This is a writing style, one in ...

When done correctly, scripts can be empowering. I write scripts (both stage and film) and have familiarized myself with the structures of each. Structure is extremely important in the flow ...

When done correctly, first-person narrative can be empowering. Especially with a character who is exposed to cancer. I think what you've done thus far is beautifully done, and I'm sure ...

I smiled when I got to the end, I know the feeling all too well. I really liked how you were able to incorporate independence and anger, and still let ...