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Re: Pandora's Box
I love the way you describe everything, I was simply caught by the story. :)
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: That doesn't hurt
I really liked it.Except for the last paragraph,i really think you could have wrotten a better ending. :) though everything else is great!
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: Tree -- Draft Two
Really awsome poem. It's original and interesting.Great job :D
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: Teenager
it's good, but I don't know why I couldn't really feel
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: "Eternal lake of tears"
ok, thanks for your help...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Love Gone Forever
great 8) poem, it really touched me keep it that way!! :D
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: I once had a cat named Sammi
Heh thats a creepy cat XD Good poem though :)
Apr 18, 2008