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Re: John's Journey
I don't ever review grammar unless it's REALLY bad, but I'm bad at grammar so I wont mention it :) Overall the story was interesting, but not enough to pull ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Cabin
Before I say anything, I always tell everyone who I review, I don't review grammar or stuff like that. Only on what is written and my opinion on it :) ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Meet the Family
Hello there! I am soooo bad with grammar so I cant say anything on that topic lol. I just usually review on the stories themselves and what I would add ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: The Old Beech Tree
oh I am bad at reviews....lol but I will try :) I wont be mentioning anything about grammar because that is my biggest problem lol. But I am here to ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: We Only Break
This is interesting :) I really liked the last part "I hear humans can die, but robots never die." "We only break." I never thought about that before. That's just ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: The Knights of YWS
I just have to tell you that I enjoyed this poem :) I have to tell you that I enjoy stuff like kings, knights, swords, all that medieval stuff! When ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Paintball Poetry
Ok I know everyone really likes this poem. Don't take it personal, I didn't really like it. There has to be that one person that doesn't like it haha. But ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: I am A Star with an Eternal Light
ok first of all I want you to know I am no professional here. I wont be mentioning anything to do with spelling or structure and all that kind of ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Troublemaker
I haven't been going to this site actually, but I think I will be coming on more often after reading your piece. This is really interesting and it just makes ...
Jan 9, 2014
