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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: John's Journey

    I don't ever review grammar unless it's REALLY bad, but I'm bad at grammar so I wont mention it :) Overall the story was interesting, but not enough to pull ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Cabin

    Before I say anything, I always tell everyone who I review, I don't review grammar or stuff like that. Only on what is written and my opinion on it :) ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Meet the Family

    Hello there! I am soooo bad with grammar so I cant say anything on that topic lol. I just usually review on the stories themselves and what I would add ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Old Beech Tree

    oh I am bad at reviews....lol but I will try :) I wont be mentioning anything about grammar because that is my biggest problem lol. But I am here to ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: We Only Break

    This is interesting :) I really liked the last part "I hear humans can die, but robots never die." "We only break." I never thought about that before. That's just ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: The Knights of YWS

    I just have to tell you that I enjoyed this poem :) I have to tell you that I enjoy stuff like kings, knights, swords, all that medieval stuff! When ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Paintball Poetry

    Ok I know everyone really likes this poem. Don't take it personal, I didn't really like it. There has to be that one person that doesn't like it haha. But ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I am A Star with an Eternal Light

    ok first of all I want you to know I am no professional here. I wont be mentioning anything to do with spelling or structure and all that kind of ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Troublemaker

    I haven't been going to this site actually, but I think I will be coming on more often after reading your piece. This is really interesting and it just makes ...

    Jan 9, 2014


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— Oscar Wilde