veeren

I left a link to the soundcloud audio at the top of the work if you wanna hear it. I appreciate you reading and commenting though

in the same way a mouse walks willingly towards the cheese mounted on the mousetrap we may never knowwwww

IM GLAD YOU ENJOYED

but consider: the prisoners are happy in their ignorance and it would be unjust to take that happiness away from them for the sake of sharing knowledge and truth. we ...

THANK YOU VYPSIES

I'll take a look when I have some free time later today !

thank you for taking the time to read it : ) I'll be happy to take a look at your work if you want to send me a link

thank you I appreciate the kind words, glad to have you read my work

this is exactly the type of feedback i was hoping for so thank you so much :,(( as for the punctuation you're absolutely correct it's what gave me the hardest ...

THANK YOU i'm glad you enjoyed reading it : )

thank you for taking the time to read it, I appreciate your kind words : ))

OFC u are always welcome and i definitely do hope u decide to either continue or rewrite this, i would love to read more of it

thank u :,(