veeren

Yo. First off, welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy your time here as much as we all do. Second, this is quite a short work for a chapter. ...

About time I give you a real review right? ;) Okay, a few nitpicks first. I scrunched my eyebrows together in question. Scrunched eyebrows are practically a universal sign of ...

Normally I would spend my time nitpicking the entire work, but I'm going to try to step away from that right now. Right after this one thing: “It’s too hot ...

Alrighty then, so this is my punishment, aye? Let's get started then. Okay I'm just gonna read through this. So gimme a sec. Mhm. Yup. Aha. Got it. All done. ...

Heyo :D I saw this earlier but only now got around to taking a look at it xP So here we go. I couldn't become more of a social outcast ...

Yo! First off, a late welcome to YWS for you. And second, it's been a while since I've been in the reviewing spirit, so bear with me. For the formatting, ...

I promised you a review at two and the morning and darnit I'll give you a review at- Well it's actually only one. So I lied. A faded to yellow ...

Better late than never :D Heyo Indie :D Okay, so nitpicks first. “I used to run..” Silas murmured, This should probably be it's own line. The next paragraph could start ...

Full edit: The school year is coming to an end, and it's time for summer to start. Ever since I can remember , I hated summer. Why , you may ...

Heyo, reviewer here to review. I'd normally sit here and list all of the nitpicks I can find in a piece, and then conclude by stating my general opinion on ...

Ahahaha! Guess who made it ;) Now if you don't know how I do my reviews, it usually consists of me pointing out every small nitpick I can find and ...

Yup, back again. they'd heard claimed. Maybe it's just me, but this sounds weird. "Ooooooh, look at that Nom's lovely hat! We typically don't use so many letters to stretch ...

Well look who finally showed up xP The first paragraph is phrased kind of awkwardly, I tried shifting around the different parts of the sentence but it just got more ...

Yo, Veeren here :D [spoiler]a young teen flicks his gaze away from the invitation towards the window[/spoiler] This sounds like you're trying to say invitation was towards the window. Perhaps ...

Hey there, pen :D I don't usually review poetry, but I took a look at this and thought it was really cool ^.^ The only thing that bugged me was ...