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Re: Diaries of a Dead Girl Prelude
MissEssence: Thank you! Alliaarany: You are supposed to not know anything from the prelude it is just an important part of the story when we near the end, and you ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Night Creatures, Chapter One
I really liked it! Keep doing what you're doing!
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless Chapter One (In progress)
You have some grammer mistakes, but I understand the wording and absolutely love the plot. It was very interesting to me from the very begening! Please continue!
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless
Very good!!! I can't wait to read more! You should definetly continue!
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
I think your poem was very good, but had a resistance to flow, yet I like what you were getting at! Great job for your first poem!
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Fade Away
I really liked it! It flowed and made since! Nothing to change :)
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Diaries of a Dead Girl Prelude
Thank you both for you're comments and I agree with your changes. I must say that I do make just and and mistyped many times since I don't have Word ...
Jun 16, 2011