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Hey glad you liked it! Well yes the rhyming scheme was intentional. I usually write free verse but sometimes just slip in some stanzas that rhyme. And that was exactly ...

Glad you liked it! The rhyming scheme was intended to be that way. My writing style is free verse but sometimes I incorporate rhyming in some stanzas so that's the ...

Hey! Thanks a ton for that amazing review! Glad that you liked it and yes mostly all the suggestions you gave were intended to be that way. Though, I understand ...

I tried breaking it into stanzas but the website again and again made it the way it is, I guess there's some bug in it. Although thanks for the review!

Hey thanks for that amazing review! I agree on all that you suggested. I'm still on the learning curve and so I might have missed those points. Anyway, thanks again!

Thanks for the wonderful review. Appreciate the suggestions. The comma in that line was intended as I felt like it needed a slight pause. Anyway, thanks for the time!

Thanks for that review and glad you enjoyed my work! Yes, I also agree with you on the word choice, but the reason for that is that this poem is ...

Thanks for the wonderful response! And yes I do also feel that line could be more apt, now that you have pointed it out. And so, I will be doing ...

Wow!! Thanks for such an amazing review on my work!! Hope you will read my future poems and some of my past writings as well !! Cheers..

Wow!! Thanks for such an amazing review on my work!! Hope you will read my future poems and some of my past writings as well !! Cheers..

Thanks for the beautiful review!I know the poem has some inaccuracies and might not hook a reader in the first time. I wanted some good suggestions to make I perfect ...

Thanks ! Glad u liked it !

Thanks ! It really means a lot. All of the things that I described in both of my poems, has never happened to me personally but I am glad to ...

Wow! Doted it. I relish the writing style. It pellucidly expresses all the feeling that go inside a person when he is exasperated. The words used and the language is ...

Thank You so much for such an amazing review. It really means a lot getting good reviews in my starting days. Thanks again!