unluminescent

Hi Harley! Here's my two cents: So, this actually made me cry because I'm having one of these nights tonight... but I love writing that evokes emotion, so I commend ...

Hey Natalie! Here's my two cents: I really like what you've written- it has a simple structure, but says so much in so few words. You would look at their ...

Hi Thedumbbrunette! Here's my two cents: I love the opening of the story- it immediately captures my interest because I want to know why she was no longer innocent, what ...

Hi, Storygirl! Here's my two cents: I love the opening of the story, the imagery is just incredible! Beady eyes tear across my form This line is a little confusing... ...

Hi Deanie! Here's my two cents: I really like what you've written, and I absolutely love the idea of basing a poem off of a book! That's really clever and ...

Hi, nowave! Here's my two cents: This story intrigues me... I like it because it is so mysterious, but at the same time it annoys me (I use the term ...

Hi, acm! Here's my two cents: I really love this poem. I love the concept behind it, and how its simple structure tells an entire life story. but my eyes ...