undertheshadow

Oh my gosh, that was adorable. I literally just sat here, smiled and laughed out loud. Kudos to this genuine, original short! :)

Thank you! I tried to fix your corrections :)

Thank you!

Thank you! I tried to fix those things, if you wouldn't mind re-reading.

Oh!! Haha no, that's totally okay. I make mistakes like that more than I do anything correctly. Thanks for clarifying though! Keep writing :)

Thank you so much for taking your time to review this! At the moment it is the beginning of a short story, but something I plan to hopefully make into ...

Thank you so much for taking your time to review this! At the moment it is the beginning of a short story, but something I plan to hopefully make into ...

Thank you! I'm still working on the story obviously, but I'd really appreciate if you'd keep checking in on my story! :)

that was interestinggg.

thanks! i'll definately use this. i'm going to be up writing more. after i get a lot done, i'm going to go back, read all of my reviews, and use ...

Thanks! I'll definately use your help.

i really hope to see more! this seems pretty cool.

Thanks! I love constructive critisism. When I said "Whenever she .." I was talking about to dog. I'll go in and clear that up. I'm going to take your pointers ...

@Nemesis Thank you for your review. I agree on most of what you said. I know I've only talked about her past, but this is a work in process. I've ...