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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Card Towers

    Hello JoyTheBrave, I'm here to leave a review :) At first she looks confused, but her face morphs into anger and thinly veiled hurt. I'm a strong beliver in show ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Foolish

    Hey Shauna! I'm here to leave a review! Hopefully you won't take my criticism personally. You know how people say if you say a word too many times it looses ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Colours of Spring

    Hey Felistia! I'm here to review! :) I love the imagery in this poem, it takes me on an adventure. that stands on the spring green farm. Bright song birds ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Quote

    Hey, I’m here to leave a review! I hope this doesn’t come off in a harsh way, I love reading and thinking about what was written. People who I hardly ...

    Oct 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror Re: Df;/$-;

    Hey Winter257! I’m here to leave a review. First of all, I love this idea, it’s “horror” without being too grotesque. In fact, by the time you reach this part ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Animendrix

    Hey! Unbreakablesmile here to write my first review. I hope my critiques don't sound to harsh, if so, I apologize. I love these kinds of plots, but I'll admit I'm ...

    Oct 9, 2015


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein