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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Card Towers

    Hello JoyTheBrave, I'm here to leave a review :) At first she looks confused, but her face morphs into anger and thinly veiled hurt. I'm a strong beliver in show ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Foolish

    Hey Shauna! I'm here to leave a review! Hopefully you won't take my criticism personally. You know how people say if you say a word too many times it looses ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Colours of Spring

    Hey Felistia! I'm here to review! :) I love the imagery in this poem, it takes me on an adventure. that stands on the spring green farm. Bright song birds ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Quote

    Hey, I’m here to leave a review! I hope this doesn’t come off in a harsh way, I love reading and thinking about what was written. People who I hardly ...

    Oct 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror Re: Df;/$-;

    Hey Winter257! I’m here to leave a review. First of all, I love this idea, it’s “horror” without being too grotesque. In fact, by the time you reach this part ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Animendrix

    Hey! Unbreakablesmile here to write my first review. I hope my critiques don't sound to harsh, if so, I apologize. I love these kinds of plots, but I'll admit I'm ...

    Oct 8, 2015


“Writing fiction is the act of weaving a series of lies to arrive at a greater truth.”
— Khalid Hosseini, Author