umaima

Hmm... Thanks for the tip but when i erite poems I usually don't decide any particular just comes with the flow...whatever rhymes :)

I am trying to but it is not coming in stanzas...what to do?

thanks tucker once again...glad you liked it and I always write this first in word then here thats why there are only a few errors rather than many...

thanks tucker once again...glad you liked it and I always write this first in word then here thats why there are only a few errors rather than many...

thanx tucker

thanks infinity...glad you liked it...I will use the recommendation you gave it was better I guess...

It was a pleasure to know that you liked it, thanks. My next chspter will be coming in 3-5 days...and till that time I will try to correct the spellings ...

It was a pleasure to know that you liked it, thanks. My next chspter will be coming in 3-5 days...and till that time I will try to correct the spellings ...

hey, first of all thanks Its great to know you liked it...I just wrote one more and you can view it here and I will surely be posting more in ...

hey thanks for telling me that and I am really glad you liked it. By the way can you tell me more about punctuation...I really want to improve If I ...

hey, i just edited it this better "Because I was sure I would have fainted With all the embarrassment And my nerve's numbness"

thanks, this really helped and I am glad you liked it...I will try editing it again

by the way my name in Umaima not unaima lol

yeah I got that....but I really didn't know anyways I made it for run and I had run making it (that's what matters)

yup it helped...thankyou for letting me know my mistakes and your opinion...