ultraviolet

I kind of like the speech. On Peter's part. Maybe you could have people ignore him sometimes, because eventually you learn to tune out mindless babble, even though I haven't ...

I want to say first off that I love this. I also love how it's Christian because I am one and it's the first truly religious thing I have seen ...

This was good! I don't know much about writing songs, but I could totally hear it in my mind. Not just the words, but someone singing it. I even heard ...

I loved this! :) The pacing was good. I'm not sure I could explain the mood this piece put me in, but it was a good one, even if in ...

First of all, let me know when you post more. I loved this. :D Second, this isn't that long. I've seen some that were longer. Heck, I've posted some that ...

Definately the Dragons in our midst and Oracles of Fire series. Both by Bryan Davis. They go together. They are a wonderful mix of christian beliefs and fantasy. Oh, and ...

Hi! One: Me too! OK, maybe I should clarify. :wink: Breaking Dawn totally ruined Twilight for me too. I was in love with it before I had to carefully structure ...

Hi! Overall, this is a fairly good piece, but improvements could definitely be made. You might want to do some background work. Like, I know that she doesn't like being ...

Not going to nitpick, since I've seen some people already have, but I do have one comment. Auteur, you said you liked the opening line, but not how it was ...

Hey! Well, I got to say I'm pretty much loving this. I'm not much of a nitpicker, so I can't really help you with that, but one thing. I usually ...

A.S., just to let you know, you can edit instead of reposting in the comments. And yes, I am the mastermind behind the EXTREMELY wonderful name. Did I mention I ...

Actually, I kind of like the ending. It makes me want to know where Eric goes, what he does. I'm assuming his uncle doesn't know he dropped school. That makes ...

Hey! I like it. :) You do kind of show not tell, though. I can't really complain much; I tend to do this a lot too. Anyways, I was entertained ...

Hi! OK, so I'm not really in the nit-picking mood. But BondGirl, I was thinking that as I read. Righty-tighty, lefty-loosey. Other than that, I really liked it. I want ...

I just want to say one thing: about the tourist in the floral print shirt, it's really sad. That's my dad when we visit florida and disneyworld and stuff. I'm ...