ultraviolet

Here to review as requested! (Sorry it's taken so long. Computer problems.) "Stina get up! It happened again, they attacked!” I said shaking my best friend awake. “Stina!!” You use ...

Here to review as requested! (Sorry it took so long. And no, I didn't forget.... >_>) Anyways, you know the drill. "Look!" Peter shook Elijah as he pointed out the ...

Here to review as requested! Sorry it took so long. Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments Snow was falling gently in Could just be me, ...

Here to review as requested! Red = Corrections Blue = Things I Like Bold = Comments Through the forest , a small bird took flew Did you mean "flight"? , ...

eab! I'm offended! You didn't PM me when the new chapter was up! Either that or I forgot about it.... No! I'm sure you didn't. If I didn't like this ...

Here to review as requested! PHASE 1: THE NITPICK Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Green = Telling, not showing Bold = Comments Prologue ” HIS When I ...

But this is only part one, right? I'm assuming that's why you have a one in parentheses in the title. Anyways, on to the review! Red = Corrections Blue = ...

'Ello there! Looks like I'll be your review this fine evening! :) Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments Remember, remember, the fifth of November... I ...

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought that the MC was a princess, and that those two boys--one she liked, one she didn't--had both been pursuing her, yet the ...

Hi! So I really liked this! I don't know much about poetry, but I know what I like, and I like this. I like how you made a box around ...

I thought it was that Mary Ann had kind of drifted away, and that she no longer put time and effort into the friendship, so the MC is telling her ...

I definitely want to read more. :) This is an interesting and unique concept, and I want to see where you go with this. My vote: Keep writing. :)

Hi! I really like this! Which I've said before... but. Anyways, grammar wise, I didn't notice anything in the read through, so I'm not going to bother doing the whole ...

Here to review! You know the drill.... There was something very different about Victoria, and I knew it. It wasn’t just a simple illness or brain damage. Her very presence ...

'Ello there! Looks like I'll be your reviewer for this fine morning. :) Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments The Haven isn't like other buildings. ...