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Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.02)
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Aug 9, 2015
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Re: The Twelve Protectors Pilot
Cool! Thank you so much! I'll make sure to reveal things more gradually. I was just kinda having issues expressing the world in this pilot because it's so short. Thank ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: The Twelve Protectors Pilot
Thank you. The quotes shouldn't have been empty. They have text, but I had brackets around them to show that they were in sign language so I don't have to ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: Sick and Tired
It is categorized correctly. This is how a slam poem is supposed to be formatted. A slam poem is intensely emotional and is supposed to come in bursts like paragraphs. ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Sick and Tired
This is a slam poem, which is arranged like an essay or a non-poem, but has aspects of poetry that define it. Slam poems are a type of poetry expressing ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (13-2)
The mushrooms thing was supposed to be an allusion to psychotropic mushrooms, but I suppose it was a long shot.
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (13-1)
Thank you so much! When I copy and paste these chapters in, it takes out the italics. Sorry. I forgot to put them back in. The thoughts were in italics. ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (13-2)
Thank you for your effort, but your review wasn't really helpful. I understand that you haven't been reading this so far, but since you said you didn't enjoy this writing ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Legend of γάτα
I agree! I think you should learn how to write an epic! They're really hard to do, but there are such great epics as the Odyssey. It'd be cool to ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (12-2)
Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews! While it doesn't seem like I do, I'm taking everything you say to heart. I'm trying to take your recommendations ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Touch a woman you mistake for a rock and watch her melt into a fudge
I've been to France, and I assumed that you were a French speaker because you made the same mistakes that other French speakers that I've met have. I wasn't aware ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Fainaru Circus -- Prologue
I did base it off a Sega game character ;)
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: There is too much
There is too much! To do! To feel! But the world does not care, about the things I do, about the things I feel-- except to call me heartless! and ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: There is too much
I'll have to do it tomorrow. I have a migraine. I'll reply tomorrow.
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (9-2)
When the world began, it was ruled by a fire demon named Hono. From the ashes of his fire came the first human. His name was Osorezu and he became ...
Jul 17, 2014