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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Purpose

    This work is amazing! it is powerful, and visual, and flat out incredible! I am deeply moved by the conversation the narrator is having. It piques my interst when you ...

    May 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Technology Re: The Loudest Silence

    I am in LOVE with this! It is SO relatable, but also a POWERFUL peice of writing! I can relate to this with things going on in my life right ...

    May 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Loud Silence

    I LOVE THIS WORK! OMG!! This peice of writing is just increduble! I dont know if this is the way you inteded it interpreted but I will share with you ...

    May 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Gaze of madness

    Spoillers!! Do Not Read If You Dont Want to Risk Red Queen Spoilers!!! This poem is absolutely amazing! i am currently readin the Red Queen Series, and this poem perfectly ...

    May 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: To The Toxic Person Who Hurt Me

    I am going through a similar situationship right now. “'You never listen.' You said. 'I do…you’re the one who never listens…..'" This line makes me feel not alone. It really ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: for "you"

    This poem really explores the human nature and how love can be easilly chnged to obsession. It is a dangerous line that one must walk, and have to be careful. ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Instructions on how to love me.

    This work is top notch! I love the mix of dreams and reality. It shows that love is as much a dream as it is a reality! You have to ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Those Three Words

    First things first, THE TITLE!!! absolutely LOVE it. It leaves you guessing, especially because when people are talking about "those three words" we automatically assume its "I Love You" but ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: try not to destroy everything you love

    This Poem is absolutely amazing! and the imagrey of "I pray for my skull to give way at the soft parts, implode at the seams"...YIKES! The visually image of the ...

    May 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: This Mask

    I Love the line "This mask, a beaming, welcoming grin" really emphasizes that underneath the mask is anything but. This work really delves into thoughts and emotions of someone who ...

    May 6, 2024


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