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aw thanks :) i sure will ;)

thankyou :)

thankyou alot for your comments :)

haha , yes i have this thing with all my commas and periods , i like them spaced out :P it really annoys other people sometimes , but i just ...

thanks for all the advice :)

thankyou :) yes expanding one of them would be quite an interesting thing to do , like a challenge :) i will see what i can get out of one ...

wow. so powerful , it just sucks you into the story .. thank you for making my day better with this amazing poem

alrighty I guess my theasorus is gonna have to help me out next time ;) :)

thanks for the comment :)

Hey :) I liked this poem , it was straight forward and you really get the feeling you probably had writing this poem. I dont even know why, but when ...

thank you both for the comments :) i will sure try to think of what you said when i write my next pieces to make them better thanks !

Hey , I'm really new to this , so if anything I say sounds stupid then oh well .. But i really liked it , the way it's kind of ...