trashykawa

I see you what you mean, I'll improve next time! :) thank you for your time and review. it is highly appreciated.

:) I'm loyal. And no, you don't have to cite the source; i was just asking. i do some photography myself, so was just curious.

hi! the speaker in the seventh stanza is Julian, of course, though i see why it would be unclear. thanks again for speaking so kindly anout this poem! your feedback ...

;) honestly conrad's my favorite character.

Beautiful.

glad you liked it %u263A And welcome to YWS.

Hi liminality! this is awesome, I love it. I'll be back for a review later :)

you spotted good; those two homes were meant to be capitalized (i'm very sloppy with my capitalization, but i'm learning :) I'm glad you liked my poem, and thanks for ...

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thank you! this makes me feel so happy!

thank you!

thanks for the review! and yes, i agree with everything you said, and I'll be sure to improve :)

Hi! And of course your review is valuable; even though one may not themselves feel as if they are any good; everyone else will definitely care for his/her comments. After ...