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trashykawa

And then, I was a careless fool

  • Poetry » General, General Re: As Sharp as Broken Glass

    I decided to ditch punctuation in this poem - kind of an experiment that i'm toying with. after all, no rules in poetry, right? anyway, thanks a lot for your ...

    May 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free of Those Chains

    All the bright places. Of course i have. beautiful book. thank you for your time reading this!

    May 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    hi tawsif! Thanks so much for your review! also, since you wanted info on that line 'fact: happiness....bla bla bla,' it's actually about how happy lasts only so long, until ...

    Apr 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    Hi! Thank you so much for the review, it totally helps! Plus, your rants are cool. they're awesome. keep ranting. And oh, just because i'm 17 and you're younger, it ...

    Apr 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    hmm.... ryan is normally a boy's name, now that i research about it, but i've got a friend who's name is ryan and who is a girl sooo.... i think ...

    Apr 11, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    Thank You! And I guess I could add a little more about the brother-relationship part. I just added that as a reason for what ryan's doing, but if more people ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Phantom

    better :)

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Marked Chapter I-Violet

    mmhm, marie lu's great. Quick question - Violet's modeled a little after Adelina, isn't she? and oh, i just read through my review again. I seem to have repeated a ...

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)

    so when are you posting the next part? edit: Ah, I see, it's ringly's chapter. Got it.

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 2: Heist

    oh, and tag me in the next entry!

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mother - Chapter 10.2

    oh god yeah, there's the action i've been waiting for.

    Mar 20, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Am i falling in love with her

    this is so damn sweet! it's really nice, keep up the good work. just a tiny little nitpick: you missed a 'the' before 'sky' in the second line of the ...

    Mar 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words

    thanks a lot, sree! thanks for sticking by and reading my sucky poetry!

    Mar 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words

    and see, this is why i asked you to review; you can spot the smallest mistakes! thanks a lot, it totally escaped my rigorous proofread.

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words

    and see, this is why i asked you to review; you can spot the smallest mistakes! thanks a lot, it totally escaped my rigorous proofread.

    Mar 3, 2019


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