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Re: As Sharp as Broken Glass
I decided to ditch punctuation in this poem - kind of an experiment that i'm toying with. after all, no rules in poetry, right? anyway, thanks a lot for your ...
May 17, 2019 -
Re: Free of Those Chains
All the bright places. Of course i have. beautiful book. thank you for your time reading this!
May 17, 2019 -
Re: At The End
hi tawsif! Thanks so much for your review! also, since you wanted info on that line 'fact: happiness....bla bla bla,' it's actually about how happy lasts only so long, until ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: At The End
Hi! Thank you so much for the review, it totally helps! Plus, your rants are cool. they're awesome. keep ranting. And oh, just because i'm 17 and you're younger, it ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: At The End
hmm.... ryan is normally a boy's name, now that i research about it, but i've got a friend who's name is ryan and who is a girl sooo.... i think ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: At The End
Thank You! And I guess I could add a little more about the brother-relationship part. I just added that as a reason for what ryan's doing, but if more people ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: Phantom
better :)
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: Marked Chapter I-Violet
mmhm, marie lu's great. Quick question - Violet's modeled a little after Adelina, isn't she? and oh, i just read through my review again. I seem to have repeated a ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)
so when are you posting the next part? edit: Ah, I see, it's ringly's chapter. Got it.
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2: Heist
oh, and tag me in the next entry!
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Mother - Chapter 10.2
oh god yeah, there's the action i've been waiting for.
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Am i falling in love with her
this is so damn sweet! it's really nice, keep up the good work. just a tiny little nitpick: you missed a 'the' before 'sky' in the second line of the ...
Mar 9, 2019 -
Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words
thanks a lot, sree! thanks for sticking by and reading my sucky poetry!
Mar 4, 2019 -
Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words
and see, this is why i asked you to review; you can spot the smallest mistakes! thanks a lot, it totally escaped my rigorous proofread.
Mar 3, 2019 -
Re: The Paper Napkin that Carried my Words
and see, this is why i asked you to review; you can spot the smallest mistakes! thanks a lot, it totally escaped my rigorous proofread.
Mar 3, 2019
