tori1234

I'm not going to review this, all the other people above me already help you so much. I just have one question. What did they find in her lungs? I ...

I loved that! It was so beautiful! Onto the review: I really liked it, but in stanza number one, the tempo seemed a little off to me. That was basically ...

You do know his last name is CULLEN, right?

It wasn't the funniest I've ever seen, but it was pretty funny! My favorite part was- Edward: Shoot. There goes my one and only true love. *shrugs* oh well, to ...

oh my, that was hilarious! little skits like these are always going through my head while I read the Harry Potter series! Just please no cussing, I get enough of ...

this is just so sad! my eyes are still tearing up!

It’s been over five months by now, I want to fill up the pages. But how? I need to write a poem, at least a little rhyme, But my mind ...

I really liked it. I just have one teeny suggestion. I think you need to combine some of the lines and create some stanzas. And the flow seemed a little ...

I liked it I'm going to keep this review short. Please capitalize the word "God" please THANK YOU!

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At first I though it was going to be another stupid little teen poem about wanting to spend forever with a guy you like, but I changed ...

hey, I already commented on this, but I'm going to do it again I ABSOLUTLY L-O-V-E LOVE THIS POEM! Seriously girl, if you ever right a book of poetry, this ...

eh, it was okay. May I suggest that you don't use cuss words? Sorry, but that's just a pet peeve of mine.

wow, that was really nice i wrote a song similar to that, but it was about my friend getting a concussion instead of drowning good work!