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Re: I'm Going to Apologize to Anyone who Reads This
I think you should revise the third stanza and make the format more like the first and second stanza's. I do love how you ended it. Is it meaning that ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Telephone Lines
This is beautiful. The last line does not make a lot of sense to me, but the poem in all is very deep. Thank you for writing! Keep up the ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: A Blank White Page
I LOVE THIS! I had no idea you were so great! (not saying I though you were bad) This is so relative to many people and I hope people start ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Broken Houses
Beautiful! I can't begin to pinpoint one specific thing this poem is about. My favorite part is the "cookie cutter houses" section. I love the detail and relativity to life. ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Death
This is very deep, I love it. It describes how a person actually feels.
Apr 21, 2015