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hey niteesh..your poem is not lyrical and it asked various questions about true love or love at first sight.Its like a girl is asking you all those questions.What i really ...

This poem is a sort of friendly or parently advice for someone who has got so blind in love that he/she is unable to make out what his lover is ...

Hi there! The way you began the poem is beautiful and creating a mystery about your lover.I love the way u talk about her beauty and her chestnut brown skin.The ...

the story left a deep impact of distaste on me... i dont mean to deter you from writing but the way you presented the story of a girl that suicides ...

well u r a pure genius... i mean the way u presented your poem was incredible..the last stanza line"final breath... so dear" is so meaningful and great and i felt ...

well this is again very honest of u to write about your personal life... i m a teenager and i know what these teenage years are like... rising harmones and ...

ok so this peice baffled me ... i dont know how to comfort you but may god bless you... may u get over with this as soon as possible... well ...

a well written peice which require a bit of correction...the last line "love is love is love" is creating a bit of feeling that love is a deep emotion.i love ...

it is a well written peice for sure ...u hv done it well bt there are few things you should keep in mind.... the choice of words are not that ...