tigeraye

I'm glad you brought up the ending, it was really tough to come up with. I re-wrote it like four times before I finally came up with something that I ...

Thanks, glad you liked it. I'd like to leave it up to the reader to decide for themselves if he made it through or not - but the way I ...

Ok thanks, yeah, this was something done in one sitting. I agree with you on most points, although I disagree that "I forgot about her" isn't something a father would ...

My last quote glitched up...I was wondering if you could explain how the line %u201CA brute as cold-hearted as you upset over some%u2026some stranger? No%u2026no, that isn%u2019t right.%u201D doesn't

Thanks for the review. Yeah, the main character is a bit arrogant and egotistical, and even hypocritical. At one point he tells Bert to stay in the car because "he's ...

thanks, glad you liked it. I like to keep some things open-ended though :P

aw, you have nothing to apologize for. When I write, I don't like to force everyone to see the same thing I envisioned. You get what you get out of ...

Nah, you're good. Part of being a writer is to not be offended by criticism! Your question of whether or not Catalina survived will be answered in the next part. ...

aw, thanks, I appreciate it. The thing I think would be the hardest to write is comedy, and I have a respect for anyone to pulls it off...its easy to ...

Thanks and yeah, death is a powerful theme. Although in this story, there's more to the deaths than meet the eye.

Thanks mate. The darkness reminds the main character of Temper in two different ways. In one way, his temper is his "darkness", as he attempts to act dignified and calm-minded, ...

lol

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. Yeah, I'll concede to it being rushed - I wrote it in about an hour. The next story I upload will definitely be ...

Hi, thanks for the review. I guess what you're saying is to work on pacing, which I agree I'll try to do. I appreciate it a bunch.

hm, I can't really think of anything that wouldn't be nitpicking. I guess the last sentence could use work, instead of all those commas making a choppy sentence you could ...