tigeraye

hello, happy review day. Without reading any chapters prior to this one, I already really liked the sibling-like relationship between Kevin and Shoko a lot. It was adorable how they ...

welcome to YWS. So...a character sheet, okay. I like coming of age stories, so that's interesting. It's good to know your characters before you write a story, rather than add ...

hello. I saw the topic you made a couple days ago asking for reviews but haven't been home until now. I tend to enjoy rhyming poems, but with that, most ...

hello. I enjoyed this story not just because it was adequately well written, but because it was nicely metaphoric of the society technology is causing us to have. The main ...

hello. It appears your goal was to create a certain aura of mystique around this man in the coffee shop, and you succeeded quite well. This is a well written ...

hello. This was rather enjoyable to me, overall. I found myself sympathizing a good amount with Ronnie's situation, feeling disconnected from his family, and his sister who won't do anything ...

hello. To start, I really like this concept. Not only is a story about a talking service dog an entertaining idea, but it's a subject you feel personally connected to, ...

This is a very good start to a novel. I enjoyed how it started out as a simple run of the mill, slice of life story, until the very end. ...

so, I agreed to review this because I saw the title and genre and was like "ooh, ghost story" -- turns out my assumption was way off, heheheh. Anyway, onto ...

This was entertaining to read, nice work. The relationships between your characters, including the janitor and Alexandra were really enticing. They're all just really likeable, even the snarky secreta

Sadly, I didn't find this as compelling as the first two parts. I mentioned in my review of Chapter 1.1 that the piece was compelling, partly because you managed to ...

This is an endearing narrative which contains a kosher message. I'll tell you what, a while back I wrote a piece with a practically similar message, and you pretty much ...

hello, the concept here is quite interesting so I decided to read and review it :) I'm not well versed in history besides US presidential history, so I can't nitpick ...

So, I was a bit disheartened to see that Roderick and Riley were both missing in action this chapter, as I was rather fond of both those characters. Predicting based ...

This seems more like an outline than an actual story. Don't get me wrong, it's a very interesting idea, and the exposition to how everything came to be is well ...