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Characters
Main - Myra
Background: age 15, French Dominican. Born in Miami, Florida. Recently moved to Atlanta, Georgia. Very smart. Has dark brown hair, looks black, VERY natural, but sometimes looks like it’s in a perm. Wears glasses. Sometimes shy. Also she is bilingual ( speaks german, spanish, french, cameron, and latin). Christian
( Her dad is french and her mom is from the dominican republic), her mother's mother is from Africa, her mother's father is from Spain. Her father's mother is from germany and her father's father is from France.
Maria
Myra's best friend also from Miami, African American (Born in Louisiana), her grandfather is from Africa.
Savannah
REDHEAD, very sassy, sometimes Myra's friend. SOMETIMES
Diana
Myra's best friend when she moves to Atlanta
Samuel
VERY CREEPY and perverted guy, that Myra ends up liking then hating
Raynen
Myra's very first friend, very friendly and very religious, also a little perverted. Myra ONCE like him. ONCE
Damarco
VERY HOT, but sadly a sophomore, Myra met him during gym when he was coaching some of the freshmen for the basketball team. Has the most SEXIEST muscles a 16 year old can have
Ciara
Myra's very nice laid back friend, that all the guys like ( and not the good looking ones)
Hadasa
Very smart, VERY SMART, and very nice, SOMETIMES
Martin
Myra's friend but also a SMART ASS, a very annoying SMART ASS. He is also very smart and a very good friend
Nina
Very short but bubbly one of Myra’s very best friend. Can be annoying. Dated Raynen.
Nia
Black girl with blonde hair. Very nice, but very tough, likes Martin. Obviously has no taste whatsoever. NO TASTE. WHAT DOES SHE SEE IN HIM????
Cade
Myra’s friend since the second grade. Goodfriend. Myra had a crush on him in 6th
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This is a very good character sheet, it is very original and descriptive! I would really look forward to reading the story/novel that this could turn into.
I'm going to just review SOME of the characters:
I feel like Myra would be easy to relate to, and could be a role model. She's pretty AND smart. Double whammy, right?
Maria and Diana seem like strong supporting characters.
Samuel confused me a bit. If he is perverted why would Myra like him? This confusion would probably be cleared up as the story would progress though.
Okay, I also have to point out that there is some incorrect grammar here. I GET THAT IT IS JUST A CHARACTER SHEET but still, grammar is important.
"Myra had a crush on him in 6th"
In 6th what? (6th grade.) Also no period is present.
"Goodfriend."
Should read "Good friend."
I would LOVE to read this story if you make it into a story!
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welcome to YWS. So...a character sheet, okay. I like coming of age stories, so that's interesting. It's good to know your characters before you write a story, rather than add them as you go. Your descriptions start out well, but you seem to run out of ideas as you go, so I'd keep expanding them. Keep at them and eventually they become like real people to you. Good luck with your story.