thunder_dude7

The way the large, oak leaves moved in and out of the sunlight, turning from one dark emerald green to a lighter jade one in an instant *No comma here* ...

I really really really love The Host. But I know Stephenie Meyer is kind of frowned upon around here. As much as I can't stand Twilight, The Host is actually ...

EEK! No reviews? That simply will not do. Let's see here... Pale light shone from behind, silhouettes dancing across the hard cobblestones, frenzies of people rushing to get home. The ...

The book is called the Alchemist, and is apparently very popular. It is also apparently a fantasy book, but to me it just seemed like a long description of the ...

Welecome to YWS! I'm a huge grammer freak, so I'll be very picky there. The tramp rubbed his hands together, above the fire. The flames jumped up, and lightly tickled ...

You know, I was about to say that the rhyming was forced when I realised that it doesn't rhyme. Not rhyming is perfectly fine so long as the rhythem is ...

*sniff* ... WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Gasp* Nice work *sniff*. This is a great song. You really hit the nail on the head in terms of how much pain is felt when a ...

... ... ... BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! *Gasp* I'm sorry...I'm sorry... Really, it wasn't because the song was bad. Which it is. I was just reading...look, nobody in Nashville is going to like ...

It is. They both go like this: Young farm boy(Luke/Eragon) lives with his uncle and doesn't know much about his parents. One day, while talking to an old man from ...

I really liked this! The only real problem is that you kept switching tenses, like here: She seems to be unconsious and looked ghostly pale and slightly green. You'll have ...

I really like this. It's too short to be a song, but this is very beautiful and sweet. Nice work. You have some serious potential. Oh, no. I'm tempted to ...

The chorus is good. I think this song has real potential. There are problems, though. But we all have issues, right? Verse one is great. But look at the sylable ...

Other than the grammer, this was pretty good. The only real thing that I didn't like was the time travel bit. I got extremely confused. I couldn't figure out what ...

It was good, overall. I wasn't really crazy about the employment agency of emotions thing. It felt out of place, and damaged the tone of the poem. The metaphor was ...

I really liked this. Most stuff has been covered. The biggest annoyance in this is that while Josh is in the car and the dialogue switches back to Kayleigh a ...