thewritingdoc

Uhm, spam? We don't do things like that on here. Not that I've seen of.

You told me to check it out so here I am. I really like your stuff. Keep writing. :)

Honestly, I didn't think it would flow well but it did. I can't say I didn't like it because I did. In fact I have no critisim. Good job!

All I can say is I thought it was fantastic. Amazing. I loved it. Except "But you have it all the same although." You have it the same although sounds ...

Beautiful. Well written

Also, whether you did this on purpose or not, you rhymed, and I really liked it. It made these lines stand out. I hoped I helped out some. It's a ...

Aww sweet. Good job :) bud

As they say: "Short and Sweet." :D A good and simple little poem here, but I do have a few suggestions: Song in My Head A simple tune Playing in ...

I didn't understand the beginning at first. But then I understood. Some areas are a little difficult to understand Use simpler words at time.... I hope. Overall, not bad but ...