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I definitely appreciate the feedback! It's very helpful indeed. :)

Wow! Thank you for the great review! I'll be sure to fix it as soon as possible. :)

This is absolutely perfect. :D

The only one I found was "all things bright and beautiful" in the last paragraph.

Wow! Thank you! :D lol Stories are my forte, really. I hardly ever write poetry.

Thank you for the review, HighTop!

Wow! I don't usually go for poetry, but this was really nice. I would've like for it to be longer, but that's just my opinion. It feels pretty solid. I'm ...

I ship it. Also, right in the childhood.

Thank you for the wonderful review, Manisha! (Also, I don't know if you saw, but there's also a prologue.) I'd be happy to answer any and all questions you have. ...

Haha You silly duck. XD I'd love to talk plots with you and scheme. Message me when you can!

Yay! I can't wait!

I really enjoyed this piece! I usually can't stand pieces that don't tell me anything about the character, but yours was actually quite interesting. I heard the character's voice pretty ...

Ohhh.....this is wonderful! So simple, so lovely, so captivating. I really could not find anything wrong with it if I tried. Your writing style is so perfect for poetry, and ...

Yay! Thank you for the review! I will definitely focus a little more on Dylan in the next few chapters. And thank you for the critique and the help. I ...

Not judging at all. XD I'm fairly new here myself! And thank you very much for the review! I'm so glad you liked it. :D