thewriterinside

Hello, love. Rosie here for a review. Aside from the few grammatical and spelling errors, I enjoyed this piece. Although, I did feel that you could've done a lot more ...

AHH! Another chapter!! This is exciting. I'm really loving this story. I have to admit though, this chapter seemed completely different than the other ones. I felt like I just ...

Hello, love. Rosie here for another review. I hope that you don't think my last one was too harsh. If it was, I sincerely apologize. I loved this chapter! The ...

Hi there! Rosie here to review. I personally did not feel very connected to your characters, even after giving it a second read. The love that your character had for ...

This story is probably my favorite that I've read on here. I read shorts when I can't sleep, and I found yours one day. It was so touching, and so ...

Hello, my dear! That was simply a lovely piece of prose. I really enjoyed it, bu was a little confused by the technical terms. Clearly you know a lot about ...

Oh my goodness. I stared at the screen for about five minutes before my thoughts were coherent enough to sort into a review. I enjoyed your piece. A lot. Like, ...

Your description and title hooked me and brought me in enough to read your short. But if this wasn't a prologue, I'd be very concerned. However, it is my experience ...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This piece was wonderful. It gripped me from the very beginning. Something that was particularly beautiful about this piece is that although I didn't know very much about the ...

Hello, love! So, here's what happened. I was half asleep, scrolling through the site on my tablet. I do that sometimes when I have trouble sleeping. Your work caught my ...

I really enjoyed this peace, and I definitely got chills at the end. I agree with the others, though. It really was too short, and felt very rushed. I think ...