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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Emo Goth

    Hey, I like your song. I can hear it now! Nicely done :D It expresses who you are and you're not afraid to show off who you are. You don't ...

    Dec 19, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Tortured Child (Punk Rock)

    Hello Lordgluzman, It's me, Kj I loved your song!! The guitar action and the way it's broken up into makes it flow; really easy to follow. I can hear your ...

    Dec 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Be Friend and Foe

    Adrian, Wow...all I can say is "WOW" That is probably the best poem I've read on this site! I had to read it twice, it's so good. I absolutely loved ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Held Time in my Hands

    Hello Adrian, First of all, I've always liked that name :D Second, your poem was really good! I liked it a lot. Time is one thing that creeps up on ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}

    Hello, I really liked this piece. It's so beautiful; the meaning and emotion in it. I found it to be very sweet and romantic how these two connected. However, I ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Devil is in The House (Hard Rock)

    Hello lordgluzman, I found your poem to be a bit disturbing, a little strange in a way. Don't take it in a negative way, please. I just think you can ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Pray (Rock)

    Hello Lordgluzman, I understood your poem, at least I'm pretty sure I did. Although, everyone understands things differently. It speaks with such an uncertainty though. What I mean by that ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Anymore

    Hello! I really really liked your song. It has nice flow and it sounds great. I found myself singing along even though I don't know the tune you used because ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: party too much?

    Hi, lordgluzman said it right. I agree with him. Your songs are filthy. That's certainly no way to get respect in life. Your songs focus on things that last in ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You were always There

    Hello syd552, Welcome to Young Writers Society!! I really liked your poem. The meaning is incredible and more people should realize the truth that your poem holds- God is always ...

    Oct 25, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Three Days

    Hello Fellow Writer, I really liked your song. It's different, yet beautiful. In fact, that's why it's beautiful, because it's different. Waiting on love...what a delicate and most sought after ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I cant answer.

    Hey, I found this interesting. But first of all, it was quite sad. There's a lot of emotion in this though. The meaning and descriptions go deeper than words and ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Let It Go - first song

    Hey JordanEmert, Nice Job!! I have to say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Everyone starts out not so good and gradually get better and better. Trust me, when I ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: Read this book!!!

    Hello!! Thanks a bunch! I'll have to look into reading that one. I have heard of it but haven't read it before. I couldn't help but notice your pic. Invader ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Angel, I was always yours

    Hello xGraceex, First of all, I have to say I was on the verge of crying!! It was so beautiful and yet so sad. It looks like I wasn't the ...

    Oct 4, 2008


Forever is composed of nows.
— Emily Dickenson