Published September 28, 2008
These are very Sucky lyrics and way to short verses but its also my
first song. Please Review it.
Let It Go - Jordan Emert
Verse 1 -
I'm stuck in this world
between what is real and
what is not and I'm sick of
waiting for you to notice me
Chorus -
I'm just gonna let it go
Let myself be who I wanna be
I'm gonna fly, fly out into the world
and be who I am
Verse two -
I'm gonna dress in different colors and
I'm gonna play my guitar all night long and
never stop and until I drop and I'm gonna start up
a band and we're gonna play our music all night long and never
stop until we drop
Chorus
Verse three -
I'm gonna run, run far away from this place
run right out into space
Chorus
I just wanna be myself
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I love this song, I can just imagine it with a tune, nice work x
This was a good song. I like the chorus a lot. Just letting go and being yourself is a good life lesson; you don't want to hold onto something that is causing you to be something that you're not. I also like verse three, too.
Good job, keep writing and keep improving (:
I thought this was pretty good actually! I like the idea a LOT. Just keep working on it and getting a little bit better every day! You'll be great before you know it! Keep on writing!
Hey JordanEmert,
Nice Job!! I have to say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Everyone starts out not so good and gradually get better and better. Trust me, when I first started I was terrible at writing. I have to admit though, I'm still not the greatest, nor close to extravagant. But I'm working on it and you should to. I see great potential in your writing!!
Great Job and Keep on writing!!!
Just put on paper what's already being written inside of you.........the world is waiting for change....
Cheers!!
-thevoiceinside
I liked your song! I imagine the tone like.. indie music, keep on trying to get better and better, beacuse we both know you could do better!!
