Mother fuckers in the club--hand's up, hand's up
Mother fuckers on the street--what's up, what's up
Everybody in the world--let's go, let's go
Party people--let's roll, let's roll
now let the citizens go crazy and wild
let them act all fucking riled
and i always smiled, always in my life
all i know is that people that don't party are strife
after monster mixed with vodka
and some shots of cocaine
it got me spinning inside of my brain
it was like i was walking on top of a moving train
Mother fuckers in the club--hand's up, hand's up
Mother fuckers on the street--what's up, what's up
Everybody in the world--let's go, let's go
Party people--let's roll, let's roll
night club, strip club, my club
my kind of club, my club--------(that club)
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[b] thevoiceinside thank you for agreeing with me but Vlad is a cool person it's just he writes a lot of bad words. He is my best friend actually. It's just the way he feels. I liked the song but he just causes to much.
Hi,
lordgluzman said it right. I agree with him. Your songs are filthy. That's certainly no way to get respect in life. Your songs focus on things that last in the moment. That's the pitfall, the hurt, and the disappointment of life. The things that you talk about will only bring you misery. If you want people to like your songs and respect you, then change your language. Because quite frankly, I have absolutely NO respect for you. And I've only read a few of your songs. What does that tell you?
hmm...someone is missing out on the good in life.
-thevoiceinside
That was pretty funny but I think the reason why people comment your songs bad it's because of the dirty language. But I still like your songs. I am just telling you if you want that your songs would be considered good by other people then change the bad words!
Uuummm...I didn't exactly get it. The 'that club' part. The mf's club, do you mean? If you don't smile, then do you party? It doesn't make sense. Not to me, anyway. Especially the part a/b 'standing on a moving train' I'd associate that with a negative sort of sensation. Bt that's just me.