thevoiceinside

HEY HEY HEY HEY!!!! Long time, no talk. Hey dude, you got skillz for hard core rockin'. It's deep and has passion in it. But... :o why so dark?! It's ...

I disagree with Munchkinzizzles. It's for sure a song. I really like it. I think you could expand it and make it longer. Add more imagery, feeling, and add to ...

Owl City is an amazing band. This is similar to Owl City but not as good. I think you're trying too hard to copy them. You have a lot of ...

Hello Well first off, this is not written in a song format. It doesn't look or read like a song. There's no break up between verses and there's no chorus. ...

I too thought it was a little rough. But very, very nice imagery for a first-timer ;) I wish someone would have told me the following when I first started ...

Hey Erica, The way I have it broken up is the way I would change it as far as formatting goes. It should be broken up into stanzas like how ...

hahaha *laughing hysterically* Wow, that was hilarious. The reviews on this are interesting :) So yeah Gluzman, my friend, nice work! I agree with Meep though, it doesn't say a ...

I really loved this. You did an awesome job with it. I agree with my friend Lordgluzman, I can't believe I'm only the 3rd one to review this! I love ...

Hey! I thought your poem was brilliant!!! VERY VERY CREATIVE!! I'm now craving string cheese. In fact, I'm going to the store right now to get some :P This poem ...

Hello there, I thought your poem was brilliant. It portrayed excellent metaphors and I thought it captured the emotion very well. I know what it's like to be lonely. That's ...

Hey Anna, Truth is a potato: stubbornly ugly, waiting for someone to change its form. Many people aren't satisfied with a simple, lumpy root. To them Truth is something to ...

Hello jcp92292, This song is so sweet! All guys should write like this. Guys should care like how you've expressed in this song. I've yet to meet someone like that ...

Wow dude, yet again...you caught me in your gripping words! This almost made me cry, no lie :cry: I've never known anyone personally that went to war to fight for ...

Hey! Nice job! Like this song. I thought I read it before now but I haven't Well I read it now and I like it :D Another good work by ...

Hey! I really liked your song!!! :D Of course, I love all your songs. You have skill, especially when it comes to writing songs well :) I respect all songs ...