thetwofridas

Ah thank you for the review! I appreciate it sm!

Wow! Thank you so much! My cheeks hurt from smiling. I just screenshotted this comment to keep me motivated in my writing! You're a star tysm again!

Thank you so much! It means so much

Hi! This is great. It reminds me of the feelings of your first love, or any love after that. Classic love poems like these never get old! I'm not sure ...

Thanks so much for this it was extremely helpful! I can honestly say I wrote this poem really fast and I just wrote what I was feeling at the time. ...

Hi! Thanks so much for reviewing! The line, 'honey seeping to the bottom of the sea,' is just a description of his voice. It mightn't make much sense but it's ...

thanks for the critiques I really appreciate it! Spelling recognise with a 'z' is actually an American spelling and since I'm not American I spell it with a 's' Thanks ...

thank you!

Great use of poetic devices! The only thing I noticed is when writing numbers you always want to write out the number. For example: Instead of '15' you write 'fifteen' ...